for Risen9/9/2005 c1 
3Amor14
Very wll written. You have such a talent for writing. Good use of words and flows nicely.
3Amor14Very wll written. You have such a talent for writing. Good use of words and flows nicely.
9/7/2005 c1 31Michael l'oeil fol
great flow and word choice good alliteration and use of oxymorons a good piece... CMF
31Michael l'oeil folgreat flow and word choice good alliteration and use of oxymorons a good piece... CMF
9/7/2005 c1 Haberdasher
i thought this was very dreamlike. it had an interesting quailty to it- the Lady Elaine
i thought this was very dreamlike. it had an interesting quailty to it- the Lady Elaine