for Here Beside You2/1/2006 c1 
5BOOMandImInControl
That was good, I have to admit that I got a bit confused in the bit where you were explaining what had happened in the past, but I got it all worked out by the end. It was really good. I like the Brick character, not sure if you were intending to make the name sort of like a meaning for the character too. Like he is her brick her rock, if you know what I mean. I think it is a very smart place to set it, I like the way it starts with the sister making the calls to Jonathan was very origninal, well at least I haven't seen it before! I really liked!
5BOOMandImInControlThat was good, I have to admit that I got a bit confused in the bit where you were explaining what had happened in the past, but I got it all worked out by the end. It was really good. I like the Brick character, not sure if you were intending to make the name sort of like a meaning for the character too. Like he is her brick her rock, if you know what I mean. I think it is a very smart place to set it, I like the way it starts with the sister making the calls to Jonathan was very origninal, well at least I haven't seen it before! I really liked!