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9/13/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
awesome questions and cool ideas with the water.. nice job
9/10/2005 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
Nice use of questioning to keep the reader focused, and I like the green and jade eyes link. Good structure, and good poetry
9/9/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
The images are excellent, though not so keen on the line "Muck squishes between my toes". It paints a lovely picture, I just can't work out what the message is. Maybe that's just me being daft.

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9/8/2005 c1 38Vorhang
It's impossible to ever know. Either the person just doesn't say it or express it, or you keep second-guessing yourself, or it's just not gonna happen. I like the way this poem asks the questions, though.

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