for Two Young Lovers11/15/2005 c1 
16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Beautiful poem. An epic piece on human suffering,struggle,and love. How we wander on this plain known as eternity in search of happiness and through it all,if we're luck,we find it. Very nicely written again.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionBeautiful poem. An epic piece on human suffering,struggle,and love. How we wander on this plain known as eternity in search of happiness and through it all,if we're luck,we find it. Very nicely written again.
10/1/2005 c1 231someday-i-will
Wow..I realised that I hadn't reveiwed you in a long while and came to read this. It was really amazing, so sad and powerful, I love it!
231someday-i-willWow..I realised that I hadn't reveiwed you in a long while and came to read this. It was really amazing, so sad and powerful, I love it!
9/27/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow... i'm near tears at the moment~ a wonderful poem about sadness and then hope and the promise of a better tomorrow~ great job!
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorowow... i'm near tears at the moment~ a wonderful poem about sadness and then hope and the promise of a better tomorrow~ great job!
keep writing!
9/27/2005 c1 emily
i have had no credit lately ive got a new email address its ive lost urs could u email it 2 me? i hope ur ok!btw excellant poem
i have had no credit lately ive got a new email address its ive lost urs could u email it 2 me? i hope ur ok!btw excellant poem
9/26/2005 c1 Eboniccinderella
This is a beautiful story-poem,I wonder if there is a word for it.You're very descriptive,which think is key,and keep the same tone,calm and waiting,throughout the poem.Two thumbs up.
This is a beautiful story-poem,I wonder if there is a word for it.You're very descriptive,which think is key,and keep the same tone,calm and waiting,throughout the poem.Two thumbs up.
9/18/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
Hi,
Wow. I'm speechless. That is SO amazingly good. It's so sweet! I love it, if only love could always be so tender...
write on,Em
42Emmytastic galHi,
Wow. I'm speechless. That is SO amazingly good. It's so sweet! I love it, if only love could always be so tender...
write on,Em
9/12/2005 c1 emily
i wasn't amazed by the beggining but the more i read the more the depth of this poem astounded me! I asked you once to write a happy poem. I think you have achieved an astounding poem by combinig both sorrow and love i can only hope to become as good as you now!
i wasn't amazed by the beggining but the more i read the more the depth of this poem astounded me! I asked you once to write a happy poem. I think you have achieved an astounding poem by combinig both sorrow and love i can only hope to become as good as you now!
9/10/2005 c1 124in theory
Holy.wow. I was deeply moved by this, what more can I say. Beautiful, beautiful.
124in theoryHoly.wow. I was deeply moved by this, what more can I say. Beautiful, beautiful.
9/9/2005 c1 SuicidalGreeting
Wow babe.
Well this is amazing I have to say. Definately one of your best.
It reminds me a lot of my boyfriend and I and how he saved me from the dark.
Very well done.
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
Wow babe.
Well this is amazing I have to say. Definately one of your best.
It reminds me a lot of my boyfriend and I and how he saved me from the dark.
Very well done.
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
9/9/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Beautiful! The description and the flow of the poem was perfect. One of my favourite poems ever. I love the description of the rain. The ending is also very well done.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserBeautiful! The description and the flow of the poem was perfect. One of my favourite poems ever. I love the description of the rain. The ending is also very well done.
Keep it up.