for Writing Prompts9/4/2006 c10 
5ScreenyMcName
The stories are quite interesting and detailed for being so short. I commend you on your imagery and humor, not many I know can pull that of (me included). Have you ever tried writing a 50 word story? If you have the time, mind critiquing some of my work?
5ScreenyMcNameThe stories are quite interesting and detailed for being so short. I commend you on your imagery and humor, not many I know can pull that of (me included). Have you ever tried writing a 50 word story? If you have the time, mind critiquing some of my work?
11/30/2005 c10 4Tikvah Ariel
You haven't updated in such a long time, I was starting to lose hope.
I love this though, the first sentence is awkward as was some of the description. The last line just cracks me up though.
4Tikvah ArielYou haven't updated in such a long time, I was starting to lose hope.
I love this though, the first sentence is awkward as was some of the description. The last line just cracks me up though.
11/30/2005 c10 10Lost Citrus
I like it. Awesome job. I like the last 'chapter', Eccentric, the best.
Yeah, we all have our little bits and pieces of writing...yours just happen to be great!
10Lost CitrusI like it. Awesome job. I like the last 'chapter', Eccentric, the best.
Yeah, we all have our little bits and pieces of writing...yours just happen to be great!
11/1/2005 c9 Orion
Now that's punny.
Now that's punny.
10/22/2005 c9 4Tikvah Ariel
Besides the fact that you used strange twice in the first paragraph, I liked this peice.
Kiwi's are really yummy. You should buy me one
4Tikvah ArielBesides the fact that you used strange twice in the first paragraph, I liked this peice.
Kiwi's are really yummy. You should buy me one
10/22/2005 c8 Tikvah Ariel
I have a dog named Autumn.
Anyways I like the first few lines, but I'm not as fond of the middle. Glad to see you've updated finally
I have a dog named Autumn.
Anyways I like the first few lines, but I'm not as fond of the middle. Glad to see you've updated finally
10/21/2005 c1 13dooley creel
wow, some truely anti-angst, you actually dared to write about feeling good, that took some courage.It is well written and your words convey the feelings perfectly. I like it. DC
13dooley creelwow, some truely anti-angst, you actually dared to write about feeling good, that took some courage.It is well written and your words convey the feelings perfectly. I like it. DC
10/3/2005 c7 4Tikvah Ariel
Now, that last bit was especially harsh Drake, but none the less conveyed the point. YOu really do need to stop feeling bad for your characters, killing them off is always more pleasurable when its...pleasurable
4Tikvah ArielNow, that last bit was especially harsh Drake, but none the less conveyed the point. YOu really do need to stop feeling bad for your characters, killing them off is always more pleasurable when its...pleasurable
9/14/2005 c6 Tikvah Ariel
Obessive Complusive much?
Anyways, this one was cool, because the figuring out who moved them and if they had been touched is a trait I sort of posess. Its not bad writing for ten minutes either, gives us a lot of insight to the character ina very short time. Bravo
Obessive Complusive much?
Anyways, this one was cool, because the figuring out who moved them and if they had been touched is a trait I sort of posess. Its not bad writing for ten minutes either, gives us a lot of insight to the character ina very short time. Bravo
9/13/2005 c1 LeavingNow
I like this beginning! Very nice!
By the way, I am Tiger_Stripes163. It's 6 in the morning, I don't have to goto school for another 3 or so hours, SO! I decided to read your work! Yay!
I like this beginning! Very nice!
By the way, I am Tiger_Stripes163. It's 6 in the morning, I don't have to goto school for another 3 or so hours, SO! I decided to read your work! Yay!
9/12/2005 c5 Tikvah Ariel
I am an inspiration? I am but honored. Although, if I ruled the rule I would be empresses, and there would be me and like, twenty other people.
On to the story. A very creative approach for writing about freedom, my favorite of these prompts yet.
Both characters were well done, although you did spend a lot of description on the girl's looks at first. Overall though, very nice
I am an inspiration? I am but honored. Although, if I ruled the rule I would be empresses, and there would be me and like, twenty other people.
On to the story. A very creative approach for writing about freedom, my favorite of these prompts yet.
Both characters were well done, although you did spend a lot of description on the girl's looks at first. Overall though, very nice
9/11/2005 c4 Tikvah Ariel
So short.
You started two paragraphs with Amaya, something you might want to consider changing. Overall, I thought it was great.Although I am a little confused about the placing. Hes tied from the above balcony, but is in her apartment? My mind probably isn't working
So short.
You started two paragraphs with Amaya, something you might want to consider changing. Overall, I thought it was great.Although I am a little confused about the placing. Hes tied from the above balcony, but is in her apartment? My mind probably isn't working
9/10/2005 c1 UJWF0WFW0FWE0WEF0
Like cool this first prompt is how I'm feeling at this exact moment. Absolutley true. Well described.
Like cool this first prompt is how I'm feeling at this exact moment. Absolutley true. Well described.
9/9/2005 c3 Tikvah Ariel
This the "Talk about your city" one?Eh, this one isn't so good. You start out, and the first paragraph is strong, the second one needs mucho improvment
This the "Talk about your city" one?Eh, this one isn't so good. You start out, and the first paragraph is strong, the second one needs mucho improvment
9/9/2005 c2 Tikvah Ariel
I liked the prose better then the poem myself. But really, these are much better then you said they would be
I liked the prose better then the poem myself. But really, these are much better then you said they would be