for Forbidden Fate4/13/2009 c27 
6Carmel March
Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)
Hope to read more soon!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchStill loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)
Hope to read more soon!
~Carm~
2/1/2009 c27 CrimsonsNight
I Really like the this story (forbidden Fate)it was wonderful i can't wait to read the next chapter in this story and your other one as well, but when i was reading i couldn't help but wonder in the prologe who was the boy crying, and i was wondering who mai was going to end up with, i really hope its Min Gyu, yoon suk is nice and all but i really like min gyu, please tell me she and him end up to gether.
I Really like the this story (forbidden Fate)it was wonderful i can't wait to read the next chapter in this story and your other one as well, but when i was reading i couldn't help but wonder in the prologe who was the boy crying, and i was wondering who mai was going to end up with, i really hope its Min Gyu, yoon suk is nice and all but i really like min gyu, please tell me she and him end up to gether.
12/29/2008 c17 Shelly
I love this story. The plot is interesting and pretty exciting. The characters are well-developed. Mai makes me laugh. I like Min Gyu the best though. He seems so mysterious. Yoon Suk is pretty bomb too. Good job.
I love this story. The plot is interesting and pretty exciting. The characters are well-developed. Mai makes me laugh. I like Min Gyu the best though. He seems so mysterious. Yoon Suk is pretty bomb too. Good job.
9/14/2008 c25 Carmel March
This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!
~Carm~
This story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review!
~Carm~
4/6/2008 c23 Carmel March
Ah, I know what you mean. I look back on what I wrote a couple years ago, and just cringe. But I'm even more impressed that you wrote this when you were 13/14 years old. You're doing a phenomenal job, and I really can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
Ah, I know what you mean. I look back on what I wrote a couple years ago, and just cringe. But I'm even more impressed that you wrote this when you were 13/14 years old. You're doing a phenomenal job, and I really can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
3/26/2008 c22 simplycarol
Update this one too.
I'm more of a lurker but, I had to come out because you haven't updated in like 2 months.
Update now ok?
Haha.
I read your other story too, it's just I don't really like reviewing.
Anyway, update soon?
Update this one too.
I'm more of a lurker but, I had to come out because you haven't updated in like 2 months.
Update now ok?
Haha.
I read your other story too, it's just I don't really like reviewing.
Anyway, update soon?
2/4/2008 c22 6Carmel March
Even though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :)
~Carm~
9/23/2007 c21 Carmel March
This story is still as good as ever :) Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that.
Keep this up, and update soon!
~Carm~
This story is still as good as ever :) Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that.
Keep this up, and update soon!
~Carm~
8/22/2007 c20 Carmel March
Really sweet chapter. I loved the ending :)
I can't wait for more of this!
~Carm~
Really sweet chapter. I loved the ending :)
I can't wait for more of this!
~Carm~
8/10/2007 c19 Carmel March
Lovely job on this chapter. I'm liking the direction that this story is going in. Update as soon as you can :)
~Carm~
Lovely job on this chapter. I'm liking the direction that this story is going in. Update as soon as you can :)
~Carm~
8/8/2007 c1 12elisefey
Aw. That was so sad and so sweet at the same time! I can already feel that they're headed toward love and heartbreak.
12elisefeyAw. That was so sad and so sweet at the same time! I can already feel that they're headed toward love and heartbreak.
6/28/2007 c18 6Carmel March
This is an absolutely wonderful story so far. I love the characters, and the way you've portrayed them. Very realistic, very believable, and complex. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchThis is an absolutely wonderful story so far. I love the characters, and the way you've portrayed them. Very realistic, very believable, and complex. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~
12/27/2006 c1 1supergal
Oh my God! Mai is Korean! Haha, KTOWN PRIDE! Aww, the five-year-old perspective is captured well here. Gotta go keep on reading!
:) supergal
1supergalOh my God! Mai is Korean! Haha, KTOWN PRIDE! Aww, the five-year-old perspective is captured well here. Gotta go keep on reading!
:) supergal
12/15/2006 c9 3Da Vinci at Work
YAY! You did the mini-dictionary! Haha. :D
Another good chap.
Just one thing. The last sentence. How can someone subconsciously drift into a DEEP slumber?
Other than that, good job!
3Da Vinci at WorkYAY! You did the mini-dictionary! Haha. :D
Another good chap.
Just one thing. The last sentence. How can someone subconsciously drift into a DEEP slumber?
Other than that, good job!