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1/3/2006 c1 229TheBrokenWanderer
I've read a few of your poems, and I thought they were pretty good...but then I got to this, and I am now sold on you. It's so unbelievably morbid, and yet, still hilarious. Shows a true sense of creativity...I love it, and, consequently, I love you.

10/18/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Since you want CC, it seems that you write this hurriedly, try to calm down a bit. And you should consider lengthening it a little to add to the effects and humor that the reader is trying to see. Overall, good job capturing the humor. I can see it clearly.

10/4/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Some of this was nice, but maybe look oveer the punctuation again, because at times it was awkward. Still, keep working hard!

9/30/2005 c1 4one who hides in dreams
lol... no comment... the punchline was fuuny... but the start kinda disturbed me
9/18/2005 c1 1Charmed Melody
Lol this was funny and had some true points but just so you know I'm not about to go kill anyone I just meant.. Ok I'll shut up now you probably got the point.
9/16/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
That's my advise don't you ever kill at night... advice

its very creepy... not my type of poem.. sorry
9/11/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I like this, it seems more dramatic than a humour poem but yeah black humour maybe lol! Anyway I like how you wrote it. QueenVixta

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