for Never Kill At Night1/3/2006 c1 
229TheBrokenWanderer
I've read a few of your poems, and I thought they were pretty good...but then I got to this, and I am now sold on you. It's so unbelievably morbid, and yet, still hilarious. Shows a true sense of creativity...I love it, and, consequently, I love you.
~TheBrokenWanderer~
229TheBrokenWandererI've read a few of your poems, and I thought they were pretty good...but then I got to this, and I am now sold on you. It's so unbelievably morbid, and yet, still hilarious. Shows a true sense of creativity...I love it, and, consequently, I love you.
~TheBrokenWanderer~
10/18/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Since you want CC, it seems that you write this hurriedly, try to calm down a bit. And you should consider lengthening it a little to add to the effects and humor that the reader is trying to see. Overall, good job capturing the humor. I can see it clearly.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxSince you want CC, it seems that you write this hurriedly, try to calm down a bit. And you should consider lengthening it a little to add to the effects and humor that the reader is trying to see. Overall, good job capturing the humor. I can see it clearly.
~~Trinity
10/4/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Some of this was nice, but maybe look oveer the punctuation again, because at times it was awkward. Still, keep working hard!
-simpleton
Some of this was nice, but maybe look oveer the punctuation again, because at times it was awkward. Still, keep working hard!
-simpleton
9/30/2005 c1 4one who hides in dreams
lol... no comment... the punchline was fuuny... but the start kinda disturbed me
4one who hides in dreamslol... no comment... the punchline was fuuny... but the start kinda disturbed me
9/18/2005 c1 1Charmed Melody
Lol this was funny and had some true points but just so you know I'm not about to go kill anyone I just meant.. Ok I'll shut up now you probably got the point.
1Charmed MelodyLol this was funny and had some true points but just so you know I'm not about to go kill anyone I just meant.. Ok I'll shut up now you probably got the point.
9/16/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
That's my advise don't you ever kill at night... advice
its very creepy... not my type of poem.. sorry
612simpleplan13That's my advise don't you ever kill at night... advice
its very creepy... not my type of poem.. sorry
9/11/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I like this, it seems more dramatic than a humour poem but yeah black humour maybe lol! Anyway I like how you wrote it. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaI like this, it seems more dramatic than a humour poem but yeah black humour maybe lol! Anyway I like how you wrote it. QueenVixta