
9/17/2005 c1
612simpleplan13
I like it.. it's beautifully written... the imagery is awesome and the sotry is so sweet

I like it.. it's beautifully written... the imagery is awesome and the sotry is so sweet
9/10/2005 c1 justasquirrel
i like it, it flows without a rhyme and gives a visual, though there's little emotion. one tip: 'realising' is spelled 'realizing'.
-K
i like it, it flows without a rhyme and gives a visual, though there's little emotion. one tip: 'realising' is spelled 'realizing'.
-K