for Leave Me10/18/2005 c1 
11les petits bateaux
Sometimes, you just need to be alone, eh? But normally, the people just need to be around you to know that you still are you. Very good job here, somehow, I have a feeling that this is based on a true life incident?
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxSometimes, you just need to be alone, eh? But normally, the people just need to be around you to know that you still are you. Very good job here, somehow, I have a feeling that this is based on a true life incident?
~~Trinity
9/13/2005 c1 21fordged-fenix
i think u need to add more like y u want them to go or y they want to stay
21fordged-fenixi think u need to add more like y u want them to go or y they want to stay
9/11/2005 c1 18Jack Ryan
This is interesting. I think it could be even better though if you tried to orgazinize it into ryhming couplets. Particularly, the rythm would flow better if you put "I" before "Don't care how" and took at "I just don't want anybody around here" at the end.
18Jack RyanThis is interesting. I think it could be even better though if you tried to orgazinize it into ryhming couplets. Particularly, the rythm would flow better if you put "I" before "Don't care how" and took at "I just don't want anybody around here" at the end.
9/11/2005 c1 59S0ulSearching
I relate to this a lot...it's short and to the point- keep it up.-pammy-
59S0ulSearchingI relate to this a lot...it's short and to the point- keep it up.-pammy-
9/11/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I like this, simple wording but a very deep message. Well done and thank you so much for all your reviews. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaI like this, simple wording but a very deep message. Well done and thank you so much for all your reviews. QueenVixta