for Stay Away3/20/2006 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
Well written. I love this. I loved the imagery of 'slipping down a spiral staircase of sorrow' very alliteratted, but well done. Not awkward to read at all, on the contrare, it flows nicely. Well written I say again
39SliversofSilverPainWell written. I love this. I loved the imagery of 'slipping down a spiral staircase of sorrow' very alliteratted, but well done. Not awkward to read at all, on the contrare, it flows nicely. Well written I say again
10/25/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, the format really worked well to emphasize the poem~ good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorowow, the format really worked well to emphasize the poem~ good work
keep writing!
9/11/2005 c1 20SilveredScales
that's cool. I like the fact that almost all started with an s. so sweet!
20SilveredScalesthat's cool. I like the fact that almost all started with an s. so sweet!