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5/12/2009 c1 113403 Forbidden
This poem is...abstract. Not in a bad way or anything, your ideas are just put together in an interesting way, it works well here. I like how you built it up, and then the ending took it in another direction.

~mAg
6/29/2006 c1 priceless gallery
So beautiful, almost as if the poem was whispering a message to me.. I loved it.. well done on this!
3/20/2006 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
Oh, well written indeed. I love this. It's amazing. But if all we fear is fear, why don't we give tit up and be fearless? (sorry, rambling and probably totally irrelevant, but it was fun!)
11/23/2005 c1 Needa S
It gives one a chilly feeling. Awesome write just the same.
11/5/2005 c1 34Smoky Bear
oh! it's epiphanies of truth like this, that cast light on the shadows of our murky souls... it's ace!

i'm glad you're still around and still writing.
10/25/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
a void... no such thing as existence~ great meaning~

keep writing!
10/19/2005 c1 34curiouzkatt
cool as ever... =^-^=
10/18/2005 c1 31Modern Poet
Haunting. Great poem.
9/11/2005 c1 20SilveredScales
Woah. Cool. Search inside for long enough and you find something, sometimes it's yourself and sometimes not.Very well written, really reflects the cold void

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