for On The Outside10/12/2005 c1 Pure Autumn
omg this is really really good i feel so sorry for raiya anna and that are such bitches - i think raiya should just fight back - maybe u could make her stronger that way
omg this is really really good i feel so sorry for raiya anna and that are such bitches - i think raiya should just fight back - maybe u could make her stronger that way
9/19/2005 c3 
7BITT3RSW33T
OHMIGOSH! that's so freaky...nonetheless, it's cool! Write more! Can u PLZ add a touch of romance maybe? i LUVE romance! ok, n e wayz, check out my story One Last Song! Itz complete :D
7BITT3RSW33TOHMIGOSH! that's so freaky...nonetheless, it's cool! Write more! Can u PLZ add a touch of romance maybe? i LUVE romance! ok, n e wayz, check out my story One Last Song! Itz complete :D
9/14/2005 c2 10TrunkZy
oh wonderfully gory. Very deep and we got some more information about Raiya. She's a good character and I must say - I like her. Hope all goes well for her in next chapter(hehe I thought this was a one-off!). Good luck and I loved the last part. deep and emotional! Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
10TrunkZyoh wonderfully gory. Very deep and we got some more information about Raiya. She's a good character and I must say - I like her. Hope all goes well for her in next chapter(hehe I thought this was a one-off!). Good luck and I loved the last part. deep and emotional! Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
9/13/2005 c2 7BITT3RSW33T
OMG! That's so scary...i mean, i've alwayz been the positive 1, but NVR have i heard a side from the deppressed ones. you HAVE to write on
7BITT3RSW33TOMG! That's so scary...i mean, i've alwayz been the positive 1, but NVR have i heard a side from the deppressed ones. you HAVE to write on
9/11/2005 c1 10TrunkZy
Bloody brilliant! Wow the words just simply captured me and I wasn't able to let go. Brilliantly written, nicely portrayed angst too! I can feel the characters feelings as I read. I simply loved the last part, though it would have made such a bigger effect if you had ended it with her writing: "I want it to end." And then of course the story ends ;) But you have ze tiny spelling mistake: . "Right what you want in life." It's write. But as I said - minor typing error (silly mistakes we all do). I really love this fiction! Definitely a fav! =D Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
10TrunkZyBloody brilliant! Wow the words just simply captured me and I wasn't able to let go. Brilliantly written, nicely portrayed angst too! I can feel the characters feelings as I read. I simply loved the last part, though it would have made such a bigger effect if you had ended it with her writing: "I want it to end." And then of course the story ends ;) But you have ze tiny spelling mistake: . "Right what you want in life." It's write. But as I said - minor typing error (silly mistakes we all do). I really love this fiction! Definitely a fav! =D Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty