for For Your Own Purpose10/16/2005 c1 
50Chandra-Moon
I loved the last few lines! Your poems, though short, give such perspective.
50Chandra-MoonI loved the last few lines! Your poems, though short, give such perspective.
10/14/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
wow,powerful and sucint,great job.
hey thanks for your review on "golden dust".hehe,it probably isnt just you,since that is one of my earliest poems and most definately by no means my best work.hm,it was kinda fake flattery,since ovbiously that never actually happened to me,and so i dont think it sounded very real,sorry about that.i also noticed the typos and (most terrible excuse of teh decade) i simply cant be bothered to change them,because i'm too busy trying to write all these new pieces to look at my old ones.I would like to know what you meant by "kind of disturbing" though.(poem wasnt meant to be like that.) anyway,it was constructive so thanks.
26Elizabeth Ebonywow,powerful and sucint,great job.
hey thanks for your review on "golden dust".hehe,it probably isnt just you,since that is one of my earliest poems and most definately by no means my best work.hm,it was kinda fake flattery,since ovbiously that never actually happened to me,and so i dont think it sounded very real,sorry about that.i also noticed the typos and (most terrible excuse of teh decade) i simply cant be bothered to change them,because i'm too busy trying to write all these new pieces to look at my old ones.I would like to know what you meant by "kind of disturbing" though.(poem wasnt meant to be like that.) anyway,it was constructive so thanks.