for On this Occasion12/13/2005 c1 Galadh Niniel
Sad, so simple and yet one can imagine the situation quite well, and think of reasons why and what the speaker might want to forget. Well done.
Sad, so simple and yet one can imagine the situation quite well, and think of reasons why and what the speaker might want to forget. Well done.
11/22/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
short and sweet... and it's a plan good enough for me.
you're way off with 'quixotic' btw but thanx for reviewing
34Smoky Bearshort and sweet... and it's a plan good enough for me.
you're way off with 'quixotic' btw but thanx for reviewing
10/20/2005 c1 37Diane Lynn
I really like your style, it works for you. I really like this poem too because it's familiar. It has a certain flow and a certain rhythm that really works. Not to mention the appropriate placed pauses that you created with you lines and punction. This allows the reader to literally hear your voice. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for the review as well.
37Diane LynnI really like your style, it works for you. I really like this poem too because it's familiar. It has a certain flow and a certain rhythm that really works. Not to mention the appropriate placed pauses that you created with you lines and punction. This allows the reader to literally hear your voice. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for the review as well.
10/20/2005 c1 103Unready
profound. the legnth leaves room to fill in, giving the reader freedom of interpretation.
103Unreadyprofound. the legnth leaves room to fill in, giving the reader freedom of interpretation.
10/2/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
Quite saddening at the end,it makes you think.Short but very effective.Lovely.
E.Ebony
26Elizabeth EbonyQuite saddening at the end,it makes you think.Short but very effective.Lovely.
E.Ebony