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2Obsidian Quill
Very well done! It's not always easy to capture the essence of a sentiment in a few lines but you did it here. I could feel a little heartbreak at the end remembering times in the past when this has been true in my life as well, made me want to give you a hug, and that's good when you can invoke emotions from the reader.
Wanted to thank you as well for your nice review, glad you enjoyed. :))
2Obsidian QuillVery well done! It's not always easy to capture the essence of a sentiment in a few lines but you did it here. I could feel a little heartbreak at the end remembering times in the past when this has been true in my life as well, made me want to give you a hug, and that's good when you can invoke emotions from the reader.
Wanted to thank you as well for your nice review, glad you enjoyed. :))