for Ashes Over Stars9/14/2005 c1 Aenima
This is pretty good ^_^ It's quite interesting...and well written...the only thing you might wanna change is the size of the paragraphs...they look kinda over-whelming...if they were smaller, I think more people would read/review ^_^ Anyway, good luck, I'm sure I'll be reviewing again!
This is pretty good ^_^ It's quite interesting...and well written...the only thing you might wanna change is the size of the paragraphs...they look kinda over-whelming...if they were smaller, I think more people would read/review ^_^ Anyway, good luck, I'm sure I'll be reviewing again!