for Little Leaf9/18/2005 c1 
80citrus scented
aw this is adorable, delicate and light heart. really pretty and cute little poem
80citrus scentedaw this is adorable, delicate and light heart. really pretty and cute little poem
9/15/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Hm...it is cute. and it made me smile.=P Nice job...
Though I thnk it should be, "The leaf dances ON the street."
Thnx for sharing.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionHm...it is cute. and it made me smile.=P Nice job...
Though I thnk it should be, "The leaf dances ON the street."
Thnx for sharing.
9/14/2005 c1 180naughtgreen
That's not cute. I see the underlying theme. The leaf is on the street because it's dead. Leaves fall because they die. And everyone is afraid of death. Death isn't cute.
180naughtgreenThat's not cute. I see the underlying theme. The leaf is on the street because it's dead. Leaves fall because they die. And everyone is afraid of death. Death isn't cute.