for Definitions9/18/2005 c1 
14Hez
I loved every adjective. (Particularly the "violated virgin" line x])
And the title is so true. Good work.
14HezI loved every adjective. (Particularly the "violated virgin" line x])
And the title is so true. Good work.
9/18/2005 c1 Little couch
This was wonderful. Great description, at one point I got lost, but overall I had a good concept of it.
"To men with coffee cups of Styrofoam,“Overdose.”
That line was my favorite. Confusing. Yet, very intriging.
This was wonderful. Great description, at one point I got lost, but overall I had a good concept of it.
"To men with coffee cups of Styrofoam,“Overdose.”
That line was my favorite. Confusing. Yet, very intriging.
9/17/2005 c1 80citrus scented
" all the statues came to life, but theyd been watching long enough to know better then to ever move"- sorry that just reminds me of this. anyway, just and epicly- amazing poem. i really got absorbed in your rich, deep and intense imagery - theres so much depth and vividness to it. really wicked poem.
80citrus scented" all the statues came to life, but theyd been watching long enough to know better then to ever move"- sorry that just reminds me of this. anyway, just and epicly- amazing poem. i really got absorbed in your rich, deep and intense imagery - theres so much depth and vividness to it. really wicked poem.
9/16/2005 c1 301sirius chatham
wow. i liked this poem a lot. it has some sort of michaelangelic power (i do not know where that image comes from but that is what i think of). it is sculpted beautifully from white marble and grey stone. i did enjoy it.
thank you for the review on my story. i have heard the criticism many times, and sometimes i adhere to it and sometimes i don't. this story is just sort of a facade; i treated it as a vinnette. (i am not sure if that is how you spell it). so i feel it is a slice of words about things in general.
wonderfully structured and clear poem. and thanks for the review.
i'm glad i found a poem that does not say 'why do you not love me?' or something silly and, well; i mean to say that a lot of poems on this site are gravely below par. yours is wonderful.
regardssirius chatham
301sirius chathamwow. i liked this poem a lot. it has some sort of michaelangelic power (i do not know where that image comes from but that is what i think of). it is sculpted beautifully from white marble and grey stone. i did enjoy it.
thank you for the review on my story. i have heard the criticism many times, and sometimes i adhere to it and sometimes i don't. this story is just sort of a facade; i treated it as a vinnette. (i am not sure if that is how you spell it). so i feel it is a slice of words about things in general.
wonderfully structured and clear poem. and thanks for the review.
i'm glad i found a poem that does not say 'why do you not love me?' or something silly and, well; i mean to say that a lot of poems on this site are gravely below par. yours is wonderful.
regardssirius chatham
9/16/2005 c1 95beti213
hm... deep piece you have here. I love the beginning with the statue, but after the ending, I'm not as sure as I was about what exactly it meant. ah well. the image of the statue is beautiful. I guess what's throwing me off is the last few lines, and what exactly overdose has to do with it. I'm going to try not to tear it apart but I'm happy that it made me think so much-well done.
95beti213hm... deep piece you have here. I love the beginning with the statue, but after the ending, I'm not as sure as I was about what exactly it meant. ah well. the image of the statue is beautiful. I guess what's throwing me off is the last few lines, and what exactly overdose has to do with it. I'm going to try not to tear it apart but I'm happy that it made me think so much-well done.