
4/26/2011 c1
25Kyllex
I really like the title of this and the way you did the bolds and italics. This is really sad but I'm glad that both girls walk out of the boy's life in the end. Good for them. (:
Good job!

I really like the title of this and the way you did the bolds and italics. This is really sad but I'm glad that both girls walk out of the boy's life in the end. Good for them. (:
Good job!
12/17/2010 c1
39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
Wow, this was well written. But i'm curious, is the based on a true story?
great job on the poem :)

Wow, this was well written. But i'm curious, is the based on a true story?
great job on the poem :)
9/17/2005 c1 Moonlight Tigress
wow... this was interestingly done! different! and sad too because they'res no way for the three of them to be happy... just like in real life...
very good, i love it!
wow... this was interestingly done! different! and sad too because they'res no way for the three of them to be happy... just like in real life...
very good, i love it!
9/17/2005 c1
81Princess-anna57
Wow, the boldness and italics really work in this poem! ^_^ It's not so confusing then! Good on you! Great poem, impressive! Keep writing!
~Anna~

Wow, the boldness and italics really work in this poem! ^_^ It's not so confusing then! Good on you! Great poem, impressive! Keep writing!
~Anna~