for Waiting For The Rain3/28/2006 c1 
5ashley m.c
wow. I liked this. I like writing about writing :) Although, it sounds kind of emo. Then again, all writers have to have a tinge of that. Well, on to read some more of your stuff.
5ashley m.cwow. I liked this. I like writing about writing :) Although, it sounds kind of emo. Then again, all writers have to have a tinge of that. Well, on to read some more of your stuff.
3/27/2006 c1 4skylines
A great poem... I hope you don't mind if I put alittle constructive critisism on her... I think you could find a way to make your lines flow a bit better. It sounds a little cut up when you read it. Yes- I know that mood- :)
4skylinesA great poem... I hope you don't mind if I put alittle constructive critisism on her... I think you could find a way to make your lines flow a bit better. It sounds a little cut up when you read it. Yes- I know that mood- :)
3/14/2006 c1 11LEDlorien7
whoa, cool. i love how the poem is sort of about writing the poem, but not. does that make sense? yeah, anyways i like
11LEDlorien7whoa, cool. i love how the poem is sort of about writing the poem, but not. does that make sense? yeah, anyways i like
3/4/2006 c1 Broken Melody
'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts
Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and
Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines
Words spill from my hand as evils from Pandora’s Box'
I remember focusing on my emotions and scribbing them into journal all the time or poetry. I think it sounded wonderful how you twisted it into something creative like 'looping lines,' I have never thought of it that way.I enjoy how I can relate to my favorite sentences.
'Last of them all, a tiny, fluttering, invisible comfort –
My peace of mind.
It rains.'
It is amazing how the simplist thing, I think, is so comforting. Well done.
'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts
Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and
Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines
Words spill from my hand as evils from Pandora’s Box'
I remember focusing on my emotions and scribbing them into journal all the time or poetry. I think it sounded wonderful how you twisted it into something creative like 'looping lines,' I have never thought of it that way.I enjoy how I can relate to my favorite sentences.
'Last of them all, a tiny, fluttering, invisible comfort –
My peace of mind.
It rains.'
It is amazing how the simplist thing, I think, is so comforting. Well done.
12/17/2005 c1 10Finger Dingbat
great job ... (did anyone tell you, ur an amaxing writer?) i know the feeling, when it acutlly hurts 2 write something down, but you have to... cos ur head so full of words it could possibly explode?-keep it up, and please write more
10Finger Dingbatgreat job ... (did anyone tell you, ur an amaxing writer?) i know the feeling, when it acutlly hurts 2 write something down, but you have to... cos ur head so full of words it could possibly explode?-keep it up, and please write more
11/28/2005 c1 SaimiChan
wah! the wonders of the deep poetry that people hold inside. it makes me go tsuru tsuru! hehehe. ^^
wah! the wonders of the deep poetry that people hold inside. it makes me go tsuru tsuru! hehehe. ^^
11/1/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
wow, how could i have missed this one? anyways, good job on this. i love the awesome images you put in here. "draw my thoughts on the page..." and "words spill from my hand" are one of my fav's. good job and KW!
luv always,~davida
wow, how could i have missed this one? anyways, good job on this. i love the awesome images you put in here. "draw my thoughts on the page..." and "words spill from my hand" are one of my fav's. good job and KW!
luv always,~davida
10/30/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
I -love- this. I can so relate. And I love rain.
I loved this line; 'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts/Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and/Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines'. I feel that way so often. Amazing.
I also like the ending line, it's symbolic.
You're too amazing. Keep writing.Hillary.
58White Tea and GingerI -love- this. I can so relate. And I love rain.
I loved this line; 'I pull a piece of paper to me, forcing my thoughts/Out through my pen, forcing the ink to flow and/Draw my thoughts on the page, turning emotions into looping lines'. I feel that way so often. Amazing.
I also like the ending line, it's symbolic.
You're too amazing. Keep writing.Hillary.
10/26/2005 c1 words music and love stay true
he he! i like this poem! The imagery is great. Sometimes poems written when you are in a weird mood turn out to be the best ones! My favorite line is "my mind runs in circles blocked my my own memories". Go icewolf9, glad she made you put it up here! The Scottish DragonP.S. Thanks for your review of my poem. You're better at writting reviews than I am.
he he! i like this poem! The imagery is great. Sometimes poems written when you are in a weird mood turn out to be the best ones! My favorite line is "my mind runs in circles blocked my my own memories". Go icewolf9, glad she made you put it up here! The Scottish DragonP.S. Thanks for your review of my poem. You're better at writting reviews than I am.
10/25/2005 c1 25Taintless
Loved it.
This is my favourite of all the stuff you've done. The others of your poems have been great, and the ideas interesting, but this...this is really original.
Loved the last line. "It rains." I guess we can all get this because we all write, I suppose. This was just...brilliant. I SO get taht feeling! You've just expressed it perfectly.
Great work, I tell you!
25TaintlessLoved it.
This is my favourite of all the stuff you've done. The others of your poems have been great, and the ideas interesting, but this...this is really original.
Loved the last line. "It rains." I guess we can all get this because we all write, I suppose. This was just...brilliant. I SO get taht feeling! You've just expressed it perfectly.
Great work, I tell you!
10/25/2005 c1 23Totally-Fuzz
well written, lovely imagery. its something i think any writer can relate to. Do you enjoy the rain? i know i do, theres just something relaxing about it, like all your worries are being washed away.
23Totally-Fuzzwell written, lovely imagery. its something i think any writer can relate to. Do you enjoy the rain? i know i do, theres just something relaxing about it, like all your worries are being washed away.
10/24/2005 c1 1rrmehta364
a good thing you were forced to put this up on gunpoint. very well written.
1rrmehta364a good thing you were forced to put this up on gunpoint. very well written.
10/19/2005 c1 Ether Boy
This is rather cool. i like that line, 'words spill from my hand as evils from pandoras box,' sounds eerie.
This is rather cool. i like that line, 'words spill from my hand as evils from pandoras box,' sounds eerie.