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3/20/2006 c1 95beti213
"i loved you like a foreign country" *grins* the wordplay in this is really cool, and also the idea in itself... falling in love with someone who you can't communicate with is really intense. love it.
3/17/2006 c1 4Jacqueline Stem
Absolutely love the lines "making maps on the dampness of your skinuntil each rib was home." very cool.
2/3/2006 c1 73Jezsh
I love this piece. Nothing else to say, just it's great!
12/18/2005 c1 20sloppy firsts
this is breathtaking.

'our language barrier becamea matter of translation.' in awe

keep writing

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12/15/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Wow. This was altogether brilliant writing. Completely genius wordplay and imagery...what a poem! Wonderful job, keep writing (favoriting this).
10/15/2005 c1 52Porphyrophobic Grape
Love your style. Simple, but still impactful. Like, lots of meaning and whatnot into each word. Beautiful.
9/21/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
This is a really good piece, in my opinion. The first two stanzas and the last in particular were brilliant. Nice piece.
9/20/2005 c1 64not sure yet
very lovely and warm, i enjoyed this, muchly pretty
9/19/2005 c1 63lackluster
it makes me smile. so brilliantly written
9/19/2005 c1 55The Watched
If this is a swansong, then what a magnificent one it is indeed, though we may only hope that this proves not to be.

Where do all the good authors go?
9/18/2005 c1 86Philip Ellis
Magnifico! Sensuous and intelligently written.

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