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9/20/2005 c1 13dooley creel
Hi, Actually the developement of the Fiction Press Hotel started with a complaint about the cramped way story format pieces are treated. The fromat is wide, shallow and dense, but the poetry format works well enough. Thanks for your comments. dc
9/18/2005 c1 2temblance
Hey. This is interesting for a starting chapter, though it gives the impression of introducing a lot of characters in a short space and amount of time. I'll probably get all of their names down in later chapters. The little bits of humor thrown in here and there made it good, too.

As of now, I'm interested in seeing where you take this, judging by your title, it seems promising.

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