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6FraxinusRoi
Beautiful. Your style is wonderfully grotty, very real without the restraint I've noticed in people trying to write about "underground" scenes, especially those of London. I was fortunate enough to experience enough of it during a summer tour of Europe, and I think you captured it very well. I enjoyed the story, as well as your portrayel of the characters. It's rare that I like both aspects of a piece. It's always either a wonderful plot, but ultimately forgettable charactors, or very well developed charactors and no plot.
I seem to be rambling.
Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely.
Thank you.
6FraxinusRoiBeautiful. Your style is wonderfully grotty, very real without the restraint I've noticed in people trying to write about "underground" scenes, especially those of London. I was fortunate enough to experience enough of it during a summer tour of Europe, and I think you captured it very well. I enjoyed the story, as well as your portrayel of the characters. It's rare that I like both aspects of a piece. It's always either a wonderful plot, but ultimately forgettable charactors, or very well developed charactors and no plot.
I seem to be rambling.
Anyway, I enjoyed it immensely.
Thank you.
1/23/2006 c37 Arsenic.Dreams
I'm so glad they finally get back together again (I hope). And I hope they learnt a very good lesson. I, too, am going to miss reading this story.
I'm so glad they finally get back together again (I hope). And I hope they learnt a very good lesson. I, too, am going to miss reading this story.
1/16/2006 c37 1Freakage
Ha! I absolutely loved how you ended the chapter; pure, hilariousness, even if that isn't a word.
1FreakageHa! I absolutely loved how you ended the chapter; pure, hilariousness, even if that isn't a word.
1/15/2006 c37 7ziggy pop eno
Amazing! My favorite chapter yet. It's going to be a great ending, I can tell-I'll miss this story.
7ziggy pop enoAmazing! My favorite chapter yet. It's going to be a great ending, I can tell-I'll miss this story.
1/15/2006 c37 6FoRd PrEfEcT13
I just read this whole thing. It's really good, despite some massive conventions errors.
6FoRd PrEfEcT13I just read this whole thing. It's really good, despite some massive conventions errors.
1/10/2006 c36 Arsenic.Dreams
I liked this chapter. I hope Cal will realize how Mac feels about her. They do need each other. Great job. Can't wait for more!
I liked this chapter. I hope Cal will realize how Mac feels about her. They do need each other. Great job. Can't wait for more!
1/4/2006 c36 1Freakage
Kick ass, reminds me of the Cobalt scene, or what it used to be, in Vancouver. Really excited to read more.
1FreakageKick ass, reminds me of the Cobalt scene, or what it used to be, in Vancouver. Really excited to read more.
1/4/2006 c36 7ziggy pop eno
What a sweet chapter. Nice to have something good happen to them :D Happy new year!
7ziggy pop enoWhat a sweet chapter. Nice to have something good happen to them :D Happy new year!
1/4/2006 c35 5sixtytwokg
haven't read this in a while.. i liked "Dare" and "It's Not Worth It"
which is not to say i didn't like the rest, but those were the two chapters i really liked
"because I just don't care," i enjoyed reading that line, Callahan's behavior is fascinating
5sixtytwokghaven't read this in a while.. i liked "Dare" and "It's Not Worth It"
which is not to say i didn't like the rest, but those were the two chapters i really liked
"because I just don't care," i enjoyed reading that line, Callahan's behavior is fascinating
12/15/2005 c35 7ziggy pop eno
I think perhaps Cal's getting closer to admitting her feelings for Mac. This chapter really seems like a development. Good job.
7ziggy pop enoI think perhaps Cal's getting closer to admitting her feelings for Mac. This chapter really seems like a development. Good job.
12/14/2005 c34 Arsenic.Dreams
I feel like giving them both a big smack. Cal is becoming so tragic. She certainly needs something to make her feel alive again and that's Mac (or I least think so). I can't wait until the next chapter!
I feel like giving them both a big smack. Cal is becoming so tragic. She certainly needs something to make her feel alive again and that's Mac (or I least think so). I can't wait until the next chapter!
12/14/2005 c34 ziggy pop eno
Is mac going to do something about it I hope he does. Another good chapter!
Is mac going to do something about it I hope he does. Another good chapter!
12/12/2005 c33 Arsenic.Dreams
I am kind of curious about what happened in those few months. Anyways, I hope Mac and Cal will be able to get back together. They are both so stubborn!
I am kind of curious about what happened in those few months. Anyways, I hope Mac and Cal will be able to get back together. They are both so stubborn!