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This was a really touching piece. I've never experienced it or seen anything to that extent but I have seen bullying and it's cruel forms. This was really well written. Your talent is amazing.
Thanks for your review!
This was a really touching piece. I've never experienced it or seen anything to that extent but I have seen bullying and it's cruel forms. This was really well written. Your talent is amazing.
Thanks for your review!
12/21/2005 c1 
1Music Makes Me Lose Control
Yeah.. I hate people. Nice job though, you're an amazing writer.
You're Writing Buddy - YWB :)
1Music Makes Me Lose ControlYeah.. I hate people. Nice job though, you're an amazing writer.
You're Writing Buddy - YWB :)
11/11/2005 c1 nor
OMG SHO YOUR WRITING IS INCREDIBLE AND I'M NOW TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH IT! i fully agree with what you said in the author's note. omg i love your writing. omg. omg. omg. WOW.
OMG SHO YOUR WRITING IS INCREDIBLE AND I'M NOW TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH IT! i fully agree with what you said in the author's note. omg i love your writing. omg. omg. omg. WOW.
11/3/2005 c1 41Suicidal Skies
This is absolutely stunning, it's beautiful in a haunting sense. Very well written.
Thanks for the review~! ^^)
41Suicidal SkiesThis is absolutely stunning, it's beautiful in a haunting sense. Very well written.
Thanks for the review~! ^^)
10/19/2005 c1 Charity F
WoW O_O...that was an amazing story...
i really like your stuff, the way you look at life and at the world...yeah, we really do need equality for all, and this is a really cool way in spreading the message...i like your initiative, girl! ^^
This was a really cool story and i'd really love to see more coming from you...thanks for your review, and keep on writing! Love it!
~Tabitha The Great XD
WoW O_O...that was an amazing story...
i really like your stuff, the way you look at life and at the world...yeah, we really do need equality for all, and this is a really cool way in spreading the message...i like your initiative, girl! ^^
This was a really cool story and i'd really love to see more coming from you...thanks for your review, and keep on writing! Love it!
~Tabitha The Great XD
10/6/2005 c1 10Sudden-Silence
Elphie, dearest. I LOVE this one... honestly, it gets to me. Very good, hun.
10Sudden-SilenceElphie, dearest. I LOVE this one... honestly, it gets to me. Very good, hun.
9/18/2005 c1 21lordelfy
wow...really good story...it is sad..great job writing it...and i agree with u on the hate crimes...everyone is different and nobody deserves that
21lordelfywow...really good story...it is sad..great job writing it...and i agree with u on the hate crimes...everyone is different and nobody deserves that
9/18/2005 c1 55Thurayya
That was /extremely/ powerful. Some people can't seem to realize that the people they kill for being different from them actually have people around them that love them. I think you conveyed all of it really well, with the flashbacks between each section of the funeral. Very good, I like it.
Keep writing,
- ala
55ThurayyaThat was /extremely/ powerful. Some people can't seem to realize that the people they kill for being different from them actually have people around them that love them. I think you conveyed all of it really well, with the flashbacks between each section of the funeral. Very good, I like it.
Keep writing,
- ala