for Dodgeball5/26/2006 c1 
31Nurgette
The story is told really well with great description. I love the fact that it was a guy! It made *another* love story something quite different.
31NurgetteThe story is told really well with great description. I love the fact that it was a guy! It made *another* love story something quite different.
9/20/2005 c1 32Stormy Daye
That was really good, I didn't realize the narrator was a guy until the end. That made the ending better, it woudl have been a little bit dull if it was just another girl has a crush on a guy story. But I was surprised and I like that. Good job!
32Stormy DayeThat was really good, I didn't realize the narrator was a guy until the end. That made the ending better, it woudl have been a little bit dull if it was just another girl has a crush on a guy story. But I was surprised and I like that. Good job!