
12/3/2005 c4
21princess max
Wow, hot! There must be something in the air, because I'm trying to un-porn my writing so it's not 100 percent smut.

Wow, hot! There must be something in the air, because I'm trying to un-porn my writing so it's not 100 percent smut.
12/2/2005 c4
6Ladako
I've been meaning to read this and really I'm not disappointed! This is a great story! I'm liking it soo much and that lemon was delicious! C ya in the next chapter!

I've been meaning to read this and really I'm not disappointed! This is a great story! I'm liking it soo much and that lemon was delicious! C ya in the next chapter!
12/2/2005 c4
2ShadesWithLove
cool... spells that can delay orgasm? muahaha... david = big big evil hottie

cool... spells that can delay orgasm? muahaha... david = big big evil hottie
12/2/2005 c4 LooseNativeMoose
I'm so happy you updated this, my home computer like never lets me review anymore but for some reason I now can for this story...
anyway, can't wait to read this unfurl, I was like thinking about it when I slept so it was in my dream
I'm so happy you updated this, my home computer like never lets me review anymore but for some reason I now can for this story...
anyway, can't wait to read this unfurl, I was like thinking about it when I slept so it was in my dream
10/28/2005 c3
22Teddy Ricker
That was quite good! I really think I am liking this story, and will read it until the end! Awesome job with the third chapter! ~P'Dale Buddy out

That was quite good! I really think I am liking this story, and will read it until the end! Awesome job with the third chapter! ~P'Dale Buddy out
10/26/2005 c3 hypochondria kills cats
ugh...must resist the urge for smut. i can't wait to see the ned of this fairy tale. why didn't we have any like this when i was growing up? great story
ugh...must resist the urge for smut. i can't wait to see the ned of this fairy tale. why didn't we have any like this when i was growing up? great story
10/21/2005 c3
1Braeden Flynn
O nice, I'm loving the story so far... keep it coming. Hehe I think I like Eric more though..

O nice, I'm loving the story so far... keep it coming. Hehe I think I like Eric more though..