
9/20/2005 c1
2subtleline
*giggles* The pink gown won me over. After that I just had to keep reading. *snickers* Now that's a new way to get ur characters together. God I luv ur stories. I see this one being fairly short but one of ur more amusing pieces of work. I look forward to this. *snickers* pink gown. btw, I adored Gwen!

*giggles* The pink gown won me over. After that I just had to keep reading. *snickers* Now that's a new way to get ur characters together. God I luv ur stories. I see this one being fairly short but one of ur more amusing pieces of work. I look forward to this. *snickers* pink gown. btw, I adored Gwen!
9/20/2005 c1
10ArchAngelic the Reborn
A pink gown, huh? Interesting, very interesting...although I don't really go for drag at all...
I can't wait to see where this is going

A pink gown, huh? Interesting, very interesting...although I don't really go for drag at all...
I can't wait to see where this is going
9/19/2005 c1
2Frayed-Wires
Ah, I love it! It flows and is truly better than most writings found on fictionpress.

Ah, I love it! It flows and is truly better than most writings found on fictionpress.
9/19/2005 c1
73xanthofile
lol what's up with the pink gown? that's like...totally random. and now i'm talking valley girl because of my mirth.
this is just too cute! i can't wait to see where you'll be taking this one.

lol what's up with the pink gown? that's like...totally random. and now i'm talking valley girl because of my mirth.
this is just too cute! i can't wait to see where you'll be taking this one.
9/19/2005 c1 ChelseaDawn
I love the majority of your works, and would really like to know if you could give me permission to print them out? I don't have time to sit at a computer and read for hours on end, but it would be fun to be able to print them out and read them in between classes and such... email me at I'd appreciate it
I love the majority of your works, and would really like to know if you could give me permission to print them out? I don't have time to sit at a computer and read for hours on end, but it would be fun to be able to print them out and read them in between classes and such... email me at I'd appreciate it
9/19/2005 c1 Kimagure
Oh, poor Eric. Looks like things are going to be rough going for him. (Not to mention that David seems to have some things he needs to fess up to...in this life and in others? ^_^)
Squee! I look forward to seeing more. :3
Oh, poor Eric. Looks like things are going to be rough going for him. (Not to mention that David seems to have some things he needs to fess up to...in this life and in others? ^_^)
Squee! I look forward to seeing more. :3
9/19/2005 c1 Kuri
This is different. Update again soon! ^-^
This is different. Update again soon! ^-^
9/19/2005 c1
2Vain Villain
Wow! this story is pretty interesting. Can't wait for the next chappie. I like it when they're fast-paced like yours is, update when you can!

Wow! this story is pretty interesting. Can't wait for the next chappie. I like it when they're fast-paced like yours is, update when you can!
9/19/2005 c1 amor
I am one sad, sad creature.
When the part about the sorceress began, I was like, 'oo0o00oo oo...' and all mesmerized-ish. Then by the 'bright pink gown' part, it was like, SNAP! out of the 0oo-ness. *sigh* Fuck it. I think I'm high on something. Like Sprite. Awesome beginning!
I am one sad, sad creature.
When the part about the sorceress began, I was like, 'oo0o00oo oo...' and all mesmerized-ish. Then by the 'bright pink gown' part, it was like, SNAP! out of the 0oo-ness. *sigh* Fuck it. I think I'm high on something. Like Sprite. Awesome beginning!
9/19/2005 c1 Cherise
Wow, that's sorta creepy. But, I am wondering, will you be showing parts of their past lives?
Wow, that's sorta creepy. But, I am wondering, will you be showing parts of their past lives?