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12/15/2005 c1 Decollage
Very powerful. Your imagry is unmatched, gorgeous, descriptive, destructive.

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9/27/2005 c1 32The Blind Guardian
I actually had to read this one twice. I'm not fully certain what you are trying to portray here. I think I understand, but it was a little confusing. Maybe I'm just pathetic when it comes to allusionary poetry like this. Anyway, you had somme good imagery and use of words in any case.

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9/26/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
awesome symbols and that ending.. wow powerful.. awesome job
9/19/2005 c1 83Prevaricate
Beautiful, beautiful imagery. And the repetition of "shatters" near the end adds a rough touch to it; very nice.

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9/19/2005 c1 2miss understanding
Whoa...amazing analogies. I got a total flash of imagery from this poem. Roses are amazing, I love reading and writing poems about this majestic flower and you've done a good job. The phrases about the beads and the shattering and the death were what really got to me, though each line seemed to have its own special meaning. Really, wow. Kudos! Ciao for now, chowder for later. TOodles! ~Choco

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