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10/11/2005 c1 7truth is subjective
I've seen a similar poem before, where a tomb is likened to a womb...but nevertheless, great thinking and analogies!
10/11/2005 c1 24mepoindexter
I read a few of your poems.

I like them. I find them very direct. You get your points across well.

You seem to lay everything out "as is"

That's really good.
10/10/2005 c1 3gummibared
My eyes are tearing up - no, really, I'm serious...I need a tissue!really (*sniff*) good poem(*sniff*).Keep writing!
10/9/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
Wow. I thought this was amazing. It was so sad.
10/2/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow~ beautifully written~ it's true, we take our world for granted~ time to appreciate^^ good work

keep writing!
9/19/2005 c1 20S. M. Sargent
I love this poem despite being Pro-Choice!

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