for Blank Canvas12/23/2005 c1 
31tears from heaven
Wow im so chuffed you actually took the time to read this!:D I wasnt gonna carry on with this really but if your actually at all interested in it i shall continue! THANKYOU!
31tears from heavenWow im so chuffed you actually took the time to read this!:D I wasnt gonna carry on with this really but if your actually at all interested in it i shall continue! THANKYOU!
12/23/2005 c6 35The Fourth Fate
Wait. I'm confused. Who is this? What's going on? Ah. This is scary. What did our guy do and who is he talking to? I can't wait for more. I hope there will be more. This has me thinking. Ah. Head.Hurts.Brain.Overload. Lol. Great story. I can't wait for more.
35The Fourth FateWait. I'm confused. Who is this? What's going on? Ah. This is scary. What did our guy do and who is he talking to? I can't wait for more. I hope there will be more. This has me thinking. Ah. Head.Hurts.Brain.Overload. Lol. Great story. I can't wait for more.
12/23/2005 c5 The Fourth Fate
I like the image of the pool and G-d's throwing sharks in. It's funny. I'm a little scared for this man. where is he going? What will happen? He remembered his mother... WHoo. Anyway ahh I want to know what will happen next. The line about an ape was hilarious. Alright time for the next chapter. La la la.
I like the image of the pool and G-d's throwing sharks in. It's funny. I'm a little scared for this man. where is he going? What will happen? He remembered his mother... WHoo. Anyway ahh I want to know what will happen next. The line about an ape was hilarious. Alright time for the next chapter. La la la.
12/23/2005 c4 The Fourth Fate
This is sort of scary. I wonder who those people are and ah. What if he killed them but he doesn't know it? Scary. Very scary. I want to reflect more ahh I want to read more also. Okay reflections first. *breathes* The memories piecing together is really interesting. I hope he (who ever he is) continues with that even though it is a hoax (though I think it's the real deal). Okay enough relfecting. More reading. la la la.
This is sort of scary. I wonder who those people are and ah. What if he killed them but he doesn't know it? Scary. Very scary. I want to reflect more ahh I want to read more also. Okay reflections first. *breathes* The memories piecing together is really interesting. I hope he (who ever he is) continues with that even though it is a hoax (though I think it's the real deal). Okay enough relfecting. More reading. la la la.
12/23/2005 c3 The Fourth Fate
O WOAH. Thinking over load! Ah. Woah. Just Woah. That whole past doesn't exist thing. Ah. Scary. I'm impressed that you knew what Israel meant. I can't really explain why. Maybe it's because I'm Jewish and even though I've known that since I was three (I go to a private jewish school) no one else seems to know it. And nice biblical references so yeah. Very good chapter. Creepy but very good. I knew a guy named Israel. I went out with him but then he moved to Israel (like the country) and I thought that was funny. Like Izzy going to Izzy. Hahaha. Okay back to being zoned in. Anyway Yeah off to the next chapter. This is great.
O WOAH. Thinking over load! Ah. Woah. Just Woah. That whole past doesn't exist thing. Ah. Scary. I'm impressed that you knew what Israel meant. I can't really explain why. Maybe it's because I'm Jewish and even though I've known that since I was three (I go to a private jewish school) no one else seems to know it. And nice biblical references so yeah. Very good chapter. Creepy but very good. I knew a guy named Israel. I went out with him but then he moved to Israel (like the country) and I thought that was funny. Like Izzy going to Izzy. Hahaha. Okay back to being zoned in. Anyway Yeah off to the next chapter. This is great.
12/23/2005 c2 The Fourth Fate
Great. The only thing I didn't like was the exclamation mark at the end. Sorry but unnessicary (can't spell... what else is new?) exclamation marks just ah make my skin crawl. Anyway other than that it really got me thinking. I already wonder about the finger nail stuff but I mean it got me thinking about it again (I tend to tuck that stuff into the back of my head because other wise it'll drive me nuts) (as if I'm sane to begin with... hahaha). I wonder though, won't he eventually tire of himself and just want -it- (what ever his punishment is) to end? Hm. I'll read more!
Great. The only thing I didn't like was the exclamation mark at the end. Sorry but unnessicary (can't spell... what else is new?) exclamation marks just ah make my skin crawl. Anyway other than that it really got me thinking. I already wonder about the finger nail stuff but I mean it got me thinking about it again (I tend to tuck that stuff into the back of my head because other wise it'll drive me nuts) (as if I'm sane to begin with... hahaha). I wonder though, won't he eventually tire of himself and just want -it- (what ever his punishment is) to end? Hm. I'll read more!
12/23/2005 c1 The Fourth Fate
Woah. Creepy. I love the titles you give your pieces. They always suit them so well. Anyway, sad but really great. The last part was sort of chilling about knowing things without knowing you know them. Okay if that made any sense what-so-ever then wow. Anyway the other creepy part was when he was talking to himself and when he was trying to figure out how long he'd been there. Poor guy. I see there are more chapters though so I think I'll continue. Very scary but great.
Woah. Creepy. I love the titles you give your pieces. They always suit them so well. Anyway, sad but really great. The last part was sort of chilling about knowing things without knowing you know them. Okay if that made any sense what-so-ever then wow. Anyway the other creepy part was when he was talking to himself and when he was trying to figure out how long he'd been there. Poor guy. I see there are more chapters though so I think I'll continue. Very scary but great.
9/20/2005 c1 8Zygnus Windell
Very nice! I'm taking it there will be more chapters? Looking forward to it!
8Zygnus WindellVery nice! I'm taking it there will be more chapters? Looking forward to it!