for No Mercy6/3/2006 c1 
20utopiadominator
Walking through Wal-Mart and talking to people online that how i feel.Oh and school sometimes No all the time.Utopiadominator Peace
20utopiadominatorWalking through Wal-Mart and talking to people online that how i feel.Oh and school sometimes No all the time.Utopiadominator Peace
11/22/2005 c1 7sketchingaCYNiC
postal service? for this story? haha. that's pretty ironic. x]
i thought this was really well written and intense. i mean, i'm sure you hate getting reviews like this ("OMG this was such a great story update soon") but really. i'm not sure if i really can critique this in the harsh, brutal way i do to some stories. then again, this is only one of your stories. =p
i thought it was great how you started. your way of repetition is very catchy. although i am rather intrigued in the person's past and how s/he got to that neighborhood, but of course, that isn't the point.
the drugs part was awesome. maybe because that's what my town is like. so uncultured that they have to resort to drugs and gossip. sick.
7sketchingaCYNiCpostal service? for this story? haha. that's pretty ironic. x]
i thought this was really well written and intense. i mean, i'm sure you hate getting reviews like this ("OMG this was such a great story update soon") but really. i'm not sure if i really can critique this in the harsh, brutal way i do to some stories. then again, this is only one of your stories. =p
i thought it was great how you started. your way of repetition is very catchy. although i am rather intrigued in the person's past and how s/he got to that neighborhood, but of course, that isn't the point.
the drugs part was awesome. maybe because that's what my town is like. so uncultured that they have to resort to drugs and gossip. sick.
9/21/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
Wow, intense, I could feel the hatred and the bitterness and anger of the character really well and in some ways relate. That was an awesome piece of work.
Wow, intense, I could feel the hatred and the bitterness and anger of the character really well and in some ways relate. That was an awesome piece of work.
9/20/2005 c1 7Vandagirl
Wow... that was really interesting. So angsty, so... weird, to me, anyways. I know people are like that, and I know people aren't like that. I don't think we can generalize people, other than saying that we have free will and we choose what we want to do, and we all choose differently. What would the world be like if we didn't?
Anyhoo... tata.
~Vandagirl ^_^
7VandagirlWow... that was really interesting. So angsty, so... weird, to me, anyways. I know people are like that, and I know people aren't like that. I don't think we can generalize people, other than saying that we have free will and we choose what we want to do, and we all choose differently. What would the world be like if we didn't?
Anyhoo... tata.
~Vandagirl ^_^