9/27/2005 c1 6Jennifer Bond-Barclay
This looks good. I'm going to have to check it out. Anyway, thank you so much for reading my story and for your criticisms. I'm having a bit of writers block with this one. It's difficult for me to write, because this is actually based on the true story of my journey. The actual story revolves around her recovery, not her sickness, so I want the first part to be quick. But I do agree that it's too quick. Any suggestions you have would be appreciated! I will read your stories soon. :) ~Jennifer
This looks good. I'm going to have to check it out. Anyway, thank you so much for reading my story and for your criticisms. I'm having a bit of writers block with this one. It's difficult for me to write, because this is actually based on the true story of my journey. The actual story revolves around her recovery, not her sickness, so I want the first part to be quick. But I do agree that it's too quick. Any suggestions you have would be appreciated! I will read your stories soon. :) ~Jennifer