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10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
The third line made me laugh. I'm amazed at how many ways you find to write about this same thing, this same feeling, and yet put so much of you into each piece, all these emotions, and make the poem unique sounding still.
10/3/2005 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Wow, yeah, this is good. I can relate to this a lot, and you used a great metaphor. Nice job.
9/30/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
Once again... How do you write like this?

9/29/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow.. I really like this.. the metaphor is relaly cool & the title is great
9/26/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
wow.i adore the metaphor here...a short piece but still amazing.especially the last line...wow,again.a favourite piece of mine by you.seriously, thankyou for writing it,its fantastic.

9/24/2005 c1 80citrus scented
this is fantastic, i know just where you're coming from. great comparison.
9/22/2005 c1 63lackluster
i adore the simplicity. yet, the message is clear and creatively done. nice work!

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