for At the hands of a Highlander2/11/2008 c4 
1Katherine-the-greate
this had very little substance but the caress was wonderful. please please with a cherry on top, please update
1Katherine-the-greatethis had very little substance but the caress was wonderful. please please with a cherry on top, please update
2/11/2008 c2 Katherine-the-greate
wonderful second chapter, although I wouldn't have her be an expert berry person if she infact ends up eating bad ones. thanks for posting. please update soon =]
wonderful second chapter, although I wouldn't have her be an expert berry person if she infact ends up eating bad ones. thanks for posting. please update soon =]
2/11/2008 c1 Katherine-the-greate
great first chapter. Your characters look really interesting! Please update soon! =]
great first chapter. Your characters look really interesting! Please update soon! =]
7/16/2007 c4 12the devil herself
I really liked this chapter. It was much better than chapter 3 grmaticaly (can't spell that word). look forward to your next update.
The devil herself
12the devil herselfI really liked this chapter. It was much better than chapter 3 grmaticaly (can't spell that word). look forward to your next update.
The devil herself
4/26/2007 c3 7Sam Mariano
So, it has definitely been so long that I had to reread the first two chapters so I didn't get lost reading the third. But luckily, your story rocks, so that was a fun thing to do.
I forgot how good this story was, actually.
Aw, I want to go to Scotland! It made James a peaceful, changed man.
GASP! Anice is Coll's sister? Well, I have to say I'm relieved. I had a slight twinge of fear that she would be something MUCH less desirable, like maybe Coll's mistress? I was so happy when I read that she was his sister.
And no, I don't think thechapter was pointless. As long as it's well-written, NO chapter is ever pointless. Filler chapters need to be written so people can get to know characters, see them interact, that kind of thing.
And I'm glad you didn't delete the story! I ghope you're still writing! Anyway, I really liked it!
Keep up the good work! :)
7Sam MarianoSo, it has definitely been so long that I had to reread the first two chapters so I didn't get lost reading the third. But luckily, your story rocks, so that was a fun thing to do.
I forgot how good this story was, actually.
Aw, I want to go to Scotland! It made James a peaceful, changed man.
GASP! Anice is Coll's sister? Well, I have to say I'm relieved. I had a slight twinge of fear that she would be something MUCH less desirable, like maybe Coll's mistress? I was so happy when I read that she was his sister.
And no, I don't think thechapter was pointless. As long as it's well-written, NO chapter is ever pointless. Filler chapters need to be written so people can get to know characters, see them interact, that kind of thing.
And I'm glad you didn't delete the story! I ghope you're still writing! Anyway, I really liked it!
Keep up the good work! :)
2/16/2006 c3 2ljj305423
I like the story idea. It's pretty well thought out though you might want to get someone to Beta your stuff for you because I keep noticing little grammatical errors. Also you might try to lenghten up your chapters a bit more. Overall though I like it.
2ljj305423I like the story idea. It's pretty well thought out though you might want to get someone to Beta your stuff for you because I keep noticing little grammatical errors. Also you might try to lenghten up your chapters a bit more. Overall though I like it.
10/21/2005 c2 7Sam Mariano
Ooh, bad berries!I don't mean to scold the berries. It just happened.Ahem. Let's opretend it didn't. :D
Anyway, I really like where this is going! It's very well written and as I believe I mentioned before, I adore the storyline, the plot, everything. It seems very good! Hope you update soon!
7Sam MarianoOoh, bad berries!I don't mean to scold the berries. It just happened.Ahem. Let's opretend it didn't. :D
Anyway, I really like where this is going! It's very well written and as I believe I mentioned before, I adore the storyline, the plot, everything. It seems very good! Hope you update soon!
10/21/2005 c1 Sam Mariano
Ooh, I love Highlanders (except the actual movie, because that sucked.) Anyway, it's a great start! *runs off to read next chapter*
Ooh, I love Highlanders (except the actual movie, because that sucked.) Anyway, it's a great start! *runs off to read next chapter*
10/19/2005 c1 7S.C.Eboni
great beginning but it was kinda confusing. esp Gabhran and Gaghran...are they the sme people or different beacause you used both names during that first part.
the relation between coll and Gabhran is confusing too...are they friends or relatives?
7S.C.Ebonigreat beginning but it was kinda confusing. esp Gabhran and Gaghran...are they the sme people or different beacause you used both names during that first part.
the relation between coll and Gabhran is confusing too...are they friends or relatives?
9/24/2005 c1 Top40princess
I like it, please go on, you will be hearing from me for every chapter, update soon!
I like it, please go on, you will be hearing from me for every chapter, update soon!
9/23/2005 c1 the devil herself
my my u really want people to like you. but i can't say i didn't like it so there you gothe devil herself.
my my u really want people to like you. but i can't say i didn't like it so there you gothe devil herself.