for I'll Miss you9/8/2006 c1 
70elvenstorm
That's a really touching piece that you've written! It's very soft and gentle with lovely emotions. Well done x
70elvenstormThat's a really touching piece that you've written! It's very soft and gentle with lovely emotions. Well done x
12/10/2005 c1 3DarkWonders
this is sad i dotn know who its realli directed at but i have a idea... keep it up its sad i nearly cried.. cheers jade xox
3DarkWondersthis is sad i dotn know who its realli directed at but i have a idea... keep it up its sad i nearly cried.. cheers jade xox
11/23/2005 c1 11BrightThief
I like it. It really makes the reader understand what you were feeling.
The short lines really make the poem wonderful.
11BrightThiefI like it. It really makes the reader understand what you were feeling.
The short lines really make the poem wonderful.
10/21/2005 c1 6RansomInBloodandSilver
That's so sweet. it has really strong emotions behind it, and it's nice to know that you will miss someone enough to write a poem for them... do you always do that?
6RansomInBloodandSilverThat's so sweet. it has really strong emotions behind it, and it's nice to know that you will miss someone enough to write a poem for them... do you always do that?
10/17/2005 c1 6WalkaLongRoadMyFallenAngel
Yes well... I love it. It made me all misty... Well done! Keep up the good work and always let your soul kin know what is going on and what you are thinking. i like it.
Ciao, Fallen Angel
6WalkaLongRoadMyFallenAngelYes well... I love it. It made me all misty... Well done! Keep up the good work and always let your soul kin know what is going on and what you are thinking. i like it.
Ciao, Fallen Angel
10/10/2005 c1 67Helpless-Dreamer01
That made me cry. Thank you so much! And i bloody hope you come back lol. You ain't leavin me here on my own forever.
Thank you *hugs so tight*! I feel all soppy now! lol. I hope you are having fun and once again i say thank you. I miss you too sister. See you very soon.
Love ya, Dani
67Helpless-Dreamer01That made me cry. Thank you so much! And i bloody hope you come back lol. You ain't leavin me here on my own forever.
Thank you *hugs so tight*! I feel all soppy now! lol. I hope you are having fun and once again i say thank you. I miss you too sister. See you very soon.
Love ya, Dani
10/10/2005 c1 19tears-of-innocence
I like the short stanzas and lines, they definately add to the emotion. and I can relate to the poem. It flows really well. Thankyou. I loved it.
19tears-of-innocenceI like the short stanzas and lines, they definately add to the emotion. and I can relate to the poem. It flows really well. Thankyou. I loved it.
10/1/2005 c1 2Lyrabird
that has really nice imagery. i can relate to that...my friend moved away. really nice. keep it up!~cassie~
2Lyrabirdthat has really nice imagery. i can relate to that...my friend moved away. really nice. keep it up!~cassie~
9/25/2005 c1 24The Ash File
you can really sense the emotion throughout this poem, well done. i love the short lines and stanza's, adds a great effect! thanks for the reviews as well! ash xoxox
24The Ash Fileyou can really sense the emotion throughout this poem, well done. i love the short lines and stanza's, adds a great effect! thanks for the reviews as well! ash xoxox