for High School5/14/2007 c1 
87Kissing Concrete
i like it- shows the loneliness and hardships of high school and how we are discovering who we are in such few words- nice
87Kissing Concretei like it- shows the loneliness and hardships of high school and how we are discovering who we are in such few words- nice
1/12/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
aw. this was sort of nice, because it felt so very naive and helpless, and... unaware? i don't know... it just really seemed to encapsulate not depression, but a lack of direction. excellence.
aw. this was sort of nice, because it felt so very naive and helpless, and... unaware? i don't know... it just really seemed to encapsulate not depression, but a lack of direction. excellence.
12/2/2005 c1 183Jo Madden
This is so true! High school is full of people who want to be 'the popular' girl or the 'perfect' boy. It's so annoying. Please keep it up.
Gamista
183Jo MaddenThis is so true! High school is full of people who want to be 'the popular' girl or the 'perfect' boy. It's so annoying. Please keep it up.
Gamista
11/14/2005 c1 6Gilee7
I like reading the longer poems by you because they're like going on this wild mind-trip where I feel like I'm falling the entire time I'm reading. With these shorter ones, I'm just left wanting more. That was the case here. I liked this one, though. It's clearly a female poem, and I'm a dude, but I still kinda halfway related, I guess. It made me think of my ex-girlfriend and her love for all those magazines like Seventeen that litter her bedroom floor.
6Gilee7I like reading the longer poems by you because they're like going on this wild mind-trip where I feel like I'm falling the entire time I'm reading. With these shorter ones, I'm just left wanting more. That was the case here. I liked this one, though. It's clearly a female poem, and I'm a dude, but I still kinda halfway related, I guess. It made me think of my ex-girlfriend and her love for all those magazines like Seventeen that litter her bedroom floor.
10/24/2005 c1 138nanashi-04
High school. in 10 lines we've experienced 4yrs. unbelievable. Faithless Juliet, Ms.278. You are a poetic Goddess.
138nanashi-04High school. in 10 lines we've experienced 4yrs. unbelievable. Faithless Juliet, Ms.278. You are a poetic Goddess.
10/22/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
So true and you admit to being caught in it, which is helps the rest of us relate to it. Really captures and escribes simply the fake, plastic world of high school.
So true and you admit to being caught in it, which is helps the rest of us relate to it. Really captures and escribes simply the fake, plastic world of high school.
10/19/2005 c1 3amethyst64
this got me thinking, really. and i agree, everything's true. i'm still in high school now so i can relate. ;) i like your poems, i'm adding you up to my faves. ^_^
*amethyst
3amethyst64this got me thinking, really. and i agree, everything's true. i'm still in high school now so i can relate. ;) i like your poems, i'm adding you up to my faves. ^_^
*amethyst
10/13/2005 c1 84this is my love for you
This reminds me how it is thought that certain stages of high school are a "rite" of passage... something that everybody goes through whilst trying to find themselves... but anyway, i like your play of words in this peom.
84this is my love for youThis reminds me how it is thought that certain stages of high school are a "rite" of passage... something that everybody goes through whilst trying to find themselves... but anyway, i like your play of words in this peom.
10/8/2005 c1 3Debbie-chan
Since I'm not in high school yet, I have no idea whether this is true or not. Nice metaphor. I like it.
3Debbie-chanSince I'm not in high school yet, I have no idea whether this is true or not. Nice metaphor. I like it.