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9/23/2005 c1 RoseSama35
So far so good. YOu've got me interested. The chapter wasn't too short, but it wasn't insanely long either, which is always a good thing. I think I already like the character Lisa because of the simple fact that she's English AND can draw. She'd be popular at my school too.

I didn't notice many problems in the story besides a letter here and there that shouldn't have been there. And sometimes, you were just missing a letter for some words. But other than that, the chapter was great! So keep up the good work and update it soon! I wanna see what happens next!

~RoseSama35~ Love&Peace and world domination to your Queen!

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