Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for No Time

12/16/2005 c1 35Cool-Ruzz
Really great poem you have here. This was nicely done. The meaning of friendship was all there. One person was trying to make it work while the other person isn't even trying. Well, keep writing! Love, Cool-ruzz

p.s. ~ do review my work if you'd the time
11/1/2005 c1 38violetsky23
definately been there before. good job.
10/1/2005 c1 9Eyetk
Oh, my. I clicked on this because it rings familiar, and now I'm sort of sadly depressed, because this nearly happened to me, recently. However, on the other end I'm also happy, because I managed to stop it in time. I hope.

Oh...dear. Constructive criticism...mm, the ending seems kind of broken...but that's a real nit-pick, and one I'm not quite sure how you'd smooth out without ruining the ending.

- Eyetk
9/26/2005 c1 bethany
WOW! This poem is so good i hope you've got other things on this site!
9/23/2005 c1 24Searching4Truth
I like this a lot. It's so easily relatable and had a good flow all the way through. Nice job! Keep writing! :-)
9/23/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Aw! I completely understand. Good work, well written. Keep writing! ^_^

~Anna~

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service