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10/28/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
such a vivid sequence. bare feet, and warm nights. reflections in harbour water.

i am in awe
4/25/2006 c1 124in theory
This is utterly gorgeous, so thick with flavour and metaphor.
4/3/2006 c1 73Jezsh
This is so gorgeous. Captures that feeling of stillness, loneliness - darkness. It has an incredible tone to it. Wonderfully written.
9/24/2005 c1 1Pirouette
That was absolutely beautiful...I haven't read a piece like that... in...purely beautiful
9/24/2005 c1 31bjw
Wow, this is...amazing. The magnificent sweep of feelings it portrays..I love the last four lines about how black walnuts can be made into ink - having a heart as a writing utensil is such a brilliant..brilliant picture. This is so surreal - the stream-of-consciousness-like tone just complements the multitude of strange and exquisite and foreign sensations the reader is made to feel.

*applauds*

I could gaze at the phrases in this for a long, long time. Thank you for writing this.

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