10/28/2005 c1 Ajna
I know exactly how you feel... It really blows. Great poem, though.
By the way, it's AnathemaCeres; this is my new screenname.
I know exactly how you feel... It really blows. Great poem, though.
By the way, it's AnathemaCeres; this is my new screenname.
9/24/2005 c1 26lucretiabaine
Excellent. I adore the general tone of this and the exclamation points. My most favorite part: "Cut out the offending body part/Slice out her tongue!/Silence is golden, don’t you remember?/We’d have never come after her if she’d learned that in the first place/Because the world has no room for her lugubrious babblings." By the way, 'lugubrious' is a great word. Lovely work.
Excellent. I adore the general tone of this and the exclamation points. My most favorite part: "Cut out the offending body part/Slice out her tongue!/Silence is golden, don’t you remember?/We’d have never come after her if she’d learned that in the first place/Because the world has no room for her lugubrious babblings." By the way, 'lugubrious' is a great word. Lovely work.