for I kissed a girl that wasn't you10/1/2005 c1 simpletonsgrace
Definately better this way. Loved the last line.
Definately better this way. Loved the last line.
9/30/2005 c1 
612simpleplan13
i like that last line.. very sweet.. the owl thing is cool.. I like this well done
612simpleplan13i like that last line.. very sweet.. the owl thing is cool.. I like this well done
9/29/2005 c1 WormsofCharacter
So vivid. The title and summary caught my attention, But I have to say I was a little disappointed. I like the beginning and the end, but the middle needs help.
So vivid. The title and summary caught my attention, But I have to say I was a little disappointed. I like the beginning and the end, but the middle needs help.
9/25/2005 c1 87A Face Worth Remembering
not quite what I was expecting from the title - much better. Great job.
87A Face Worth Rememberingnot quite what I was expecting from the title - much better. Great job.
9/24/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
I think this needs some work. There was some promise in it, so keep working on it.
-simpleton
I think this needs some work. There was some promise in it, so keep working on it.
-simpleton
9/24/2005 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
I like the way i could like see the street like and everything. good job
147hiding behind amber eyesI like the way i could like see the street like and everything. good job