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10/23/2005 c1 16Skitters
I love it its so beautiful
9/30/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful metaphor
9/27/2005 c1 200Maxwell K
um call me perverse but i am starting to notice a "pun" in the word come. And this "pun" would truely show that in a quiet night, one could pop "an honest hint of glee" The fun with poetry and all im finding (espcially poems such wellcrafted as the ones you pen) is that everything ahs double meanings, or at least i think so. Hope my grotesque ideas gave you a jaded view of this review, i really cherish your poem.
9/25/2005 c1 87A Face Worth Remembering
Nice. I liked the rhyming
9/24/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Simple but gives off a witty feel.
9/24/2005 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
interesting. i like it tho

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