for Her Smile9/27/2005 c1 
200Maxwell K
um call me perverse but i am starting to notice a "pun" in the word come. And this "pun" would truely show that in a quiet night, one could pop "an honest hint of glee" The fun with poetry and all im finding (espcially poems such wellcrafted as the ones you pen) is that everything ahs double meanings, or at least i think so. Hope my grotesque ideas gave you a jaded view of this review, i really cherish your poem.
200Maxwell Kum call me perverse but i am starting to notice a "pun" in the word come. And this "pun" would truely show that in a quiet night, one could pop "an honest hint of glee" The fun with poetry and all im finding (espcially poems such wellcrafted as the ones you pen) is that everything ahs double meanings, or at least i think so. Hope my grotesque ideas gave you a jaded view of this review, i really cherish your poem.