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for I Ate the Apple

12/11/2005 c1 7Kyran
When ever I try to describe things they always seem to turn into a complicated mathematical formula. A first I thought this was simply going to be a pointless description of a wonderful place but it turn into something deep and meaningful. Two Thumbs Up!
11/30/2005 c1 3CrazyDeafGirl
Hm. Interesting, how you made it seems as a child cannot truly live until his/her parent chose to let go. I really liked this story.
10/4/2005 c1 21ever.dream.of.me.please
Yhey!

I liked this story alot. The descriptions and they way you look at things in this is very cool.

(Sorry for the short review, I'm rushing off to eat.)
9/27/2005 c1 Robert Anthony Montesino
Absolutely beautifully descriptive write, full of power and the kind of grace that opens minds & hearts...very well done!
9/25/2005 c1 2Christiana Gallagher
You use a lot of description in this story especially metaphors and similies, which makes this piece well-written. I love your description of the forest and the little girl.

Good job.
9/25/2005 c1 6Broken Telephone
Wow! This is really neat! You're totally right. It's completely surreal, but it's AWESOME! The imagery is great! It was ALL great! Good job!

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