for Your Hazel Eyes10/15/2005 c1 
10Quid
It's nice how all of the limmericks have the same rhyme, and I liked the poem, but it would be easier to read the rhythm if it wasn't centered.
10QuidIt's nice how all of the limmericks have the same rhyme, and I liked the poem, but it would be easier to read the rhythm if it wasn't centered.
10/2/2005 c1 31bjw
This is so sweet. I really like how you portray love as a calm, all-encompassing feeling.."The beauties of the world dance in wonder, Leaving me with such visions to ponder, Only with you can such magic arise." It's beautiful. I love this.:) Keep writing!
31bjwThis is so sweet. I really like how you portray love as a calm, all-encompassing feeling.."The beauties of the world dance in wonder, Leaving me with such visions to ponder, Only with you can such magic arise." It's beautiful. I love this.:) Keep writing!
9/29/2005 c1 shakespeare
"as i gaze into those hazel eyes?"?hmm.. hahah.. first line copyrighted from me! wow... my first poetic line... thanks for developing it! in such a short period of time some more... good job!
"as i gaze into those hazel eyes?"?hmm.. hahah.. first line copyrighted from me! wow... my first poetic line... thanks for developing it! in such a short period of time some more... good job!
9/26/2005 c1 4annicel
Your poems are always so full of passion and, I don't know, feeling. The words almost seem to jump off the page. This poem was lovely, simply lovely. Wonderful descriptive adjectives and good flow... Awesome job, chica. You continue to amaze me. :o)
4annicelYour poems are always so full of passion and, I don't know, feeling. The words almost seem to jump off the page. This poem was lovely, simply lovely. Wonderful descriptive adjectives and good flow... Awesome job, chica. You continue to amaze me. :o)
9/25/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Very good. I've never had the courage to attempt limericks, as I've heard they're the most difficult type of poetry to write, but you pull this off quite effortlessly.
Keep writing.
50Chandra-MoonVery good. I've never had the courage to attempt limericks, as I've heard they're the most difficult type of poetry to write, but you pull this off quite effortlessly.
Keep writing.