for She Never Cared1/18/2006 c1 25
this poem is stupid but I liked it.
this poem is stupid but I liked it.
1/4/2006 c1 Slowly Sinking
Very emotive piece, I love the change of perspective. Good work!
P.S. Thanks for the review!
Very emotive piece, I love the change of perspective. Good work!
P.S. Thanks for the review!
11/10/2005 c1 
59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
o...i loved this...really well set out and you captured ur emotions PERFECTLY, good job^_^
59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthyso...i loved this...really well set out and you captured ur emotions PERFECTLY, good job^_^
11/9/2005 c1 28Accalia Aeryn
Oh, that's so sad. That poor boy getting his heart broken. It's a great poem though. Keep writing! -Accalia Aern
28Accalia AerynOh, that's so sad. That poor boy getting his heart broken. It's a great poem though. Keep writing! -Accalia Aern
11/7/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Hm. Very clever and witty in its cruelty. This actually put a smile on my face (call me a sadist at times).
Maybe coz somewhere deep, I can half-heartedly relate to this, probably like the everyone else. Thnx very much for sharing.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionHm. Very clever and witty in its cruelty. This actually put a smile on my face (call me a sadist at times).
Maybe coz somewhere deep, I can half-heartedly relate to this, probably like the everyone else. Thnx very much for sharing.
10/31/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
sorry bout lack of reviews as well! been working on my site and school and work so ive kinda been backing away from ficpress, lol. i like this piece tho! im not fond of the bold writing but thats me being picky and silly so ignore that! lol ;) write more
3Cry Tears of Darknesssorry bout lack of reviews as well! been working on my site and school and work so ive kinda been backing away from ficpress, lol. i like this piece tho! im not fond of the bold writing but thats me being picky and silly so ignore that! lol ;) write more
10/18/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Wow...touching. I love the lines in here, especially the last one. Good job.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxWow...touching. I love the lines in here, especially the last one. Good job.
~~Trinity
9/30/2005 c1 4one who hides in dreams
um... short and concise.. it really plays into character as well since you didn't dwell too much on how he felt.. but personally i think it's really sad to be ignored like that
4one who hides in dreamsum... short and concise.. it really plays into character as well since you didn't dwell too much on how he felt.. but personally i think it's really sad to be ignored like that
9/26/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
wow, the poor guy. that's a great poem. i mean, great. yeah. nice poem! very nice poem.-kwazykandypie AKA KellY Ann-
13KwazyKandyPiewow, the poor guy. that's a great poem. i mean, great. yeah. nice poem! very nice poem.-kwazykandypie AKA KellY Ann-