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2/11/2007 c1 131theory of black
This made me smile. I loved the flow and I'm going to venture out and make a pun... it flowed like water (ha ha). I'm a Pisces and I absolutely adored the second stanza. It was beautiful.
10/10/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Hm pisces... such an interesting place to be in the world... or born under.

Yet your imaginitive side shows you are perhaps one... as well as intuitive in your writing. Its interesting. I found your poem beautiful and dark...

I love the adventure you spill out... the movements of the gods and the will to keep going. Very good piece. The flow was wonderful as well as the imagery. Write on!
10/3/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
I liek this.. very cool the whole water thing
10/1/2005 c1 WormsofCharacter
This quite good. "Ocean of electric danger" is a wonderful line, I think. By the way, I like what you did with "I kissed a girl who wasn't you"; it has quite the regretful and even painful tone to it. I love vivid poetry. (too bad I can't write it myself!)
9/28/2005 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
good ending...i like it its good

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