for The Devil Cares, Not7/2/2012 c1 Guest
I love the imagery and raw emotion in this piece.
I love the imagery and raw emotion in this piece.
7/3/2007 c1 
30Charmed.imsure-Always
very ... Im going to say deep for lack of a better word. You write poems about things everybody writes poems about but you have a really unique and special way of expressing such things. Very awesome!
30Charmed.imsure-Alwaysvery ... Im going to say deep for lack of a better word. You write poems about things everybody writes poems about but you have a really unique and special way of expressing such things. Very awesome!
11/29/2005 c1 39Speaker For The Live
Awesome piece, a different take. 2 things: "Arms scarred but she doesn’t care." That line is a bit too long for the rhythm, it pulls the reader out of the piece.
"between good and bad" Do you really want to use "bad" here? It sounds slightly childish in a piece that is otherwise fully mature.
39Speaker For The LiveAwesome piece, a different take. 2 things: "Arms scarred but she doesn’t care." That line is a bit too long for the rhythm, it pulls the reader out of the piece.
"between good and bad" Do you really want to use "bad" here? It sounds slightly childish in a piece that is otherwise fully mature.
11/23/2005 c1 28emilyrachel18
this literally made me cry when i read it. Alex you don't know how much i can relate to this, how much i can relate to this and i think your an inspiration to all those who have ever felt this way. In a way by you voicing what is said in this poem it makes me feel sane for even thinking it, although i know i haven't the skill to put it down in the words you do. Alex i truely believe this is the best of your work so far and you can only get better. You have something that many poets lack and that is true feeling and emotion in your work and it's a gift believe me.
28emilyrachel18this literally made me cry when i read it. Alex you don't know how much i can relate to this, how much i can relate to this and i think your an inspiration to all those who have ever felt this way. In a way by you voicing what is said in this poem it makes me feel sane for even thinking it, although i know i haven't the skill to put it down in the words you do. Alex i truely believe this is the best of your work so far and you can only get better. You have something that many poets lack and that is true feeling and emotion in your work and it's a gift believe me.
11/16/2005 c1 55Lellida
Long and sleek by her side.There’s no need for her pride.Her life a struggle she has fought.Between good and bad she is caught.A deal with the devil, her soul he bought.
This stanza is so cool how it is arranged in almost a staircase. It's an emotional poem, and I really like the last line- so powerful.
55LellidaLong and sleek by her side.There’s no need for her pride.Her life a struggle she has fought.Between good and bad she is caught.A deal with the devil, her soul he bought.
This stanza is so cool how it is arranged in almost a staircase. It's an emotional poem, and I really like the last line- so powerful.
11/15/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
Very awesome and strong. As usual a very deep and intense piece stzting well on corrupt human condition and morality. Nicely put.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionVery awesome and strong. As usual a very deep and intense piece stzting well on corrupt human condition and morality. Nicely put.
10/11/2005 c1 emilyrachel
oh my god alex this is amazing! so many of these lyrics i can relate to right now. When did u write this? This is truely amazing
oh my god alex this is amazing! so many of these lyrics i can relate to right now. When did u write this? This is truely amazing
10/3/2005 c1 117xHannahx
wow, you know i can relate to practically every single word of this, right down to the hair colour! scary stuff... but its fantastic!
Han
117xHannahxwow, you know i can relate to practically every single word of this, right down to the hair colour! scary stuff... but its fantastic!
Han
10/1/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
WOW! I love this one, it echo some of what I feel also. This week has not been a good one for me, and this echoed some of that.
Wonderful job.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserWOW! I love this one, it echo some of what I feel also. This week has not been a good one for me, and this echoed some of that.
Wonderful job.
Keep it up.
9/30/2005 c1 Imke
Hey Alex, how are you doing?
I like this poem a lot, it has a strong beginning and a powerful ending. I don't think it's your best, but it's definitely a good poem.
'She thought death was the ultimate cure...' A very powerful line, and it shows a lot of emotion..
So yeah, great job on this poem, and we'll talk soon.
Much love, Imke.
Hey Alex, how are you doing?
I like this poem a lot, it has a strong beginning and a powerful ending. I don't think it's your best, but it's definitely a good poem.
'She thought death was the ultimate cure...' A very powerful line, and it shows a lot of emotion..
So yeah, great job on this poem, and we'll talk soon.
Much love, Imke.
9/29/2005 c1 115HauntedMisery
This touched me my friend is a satanic and it hurts me so much. This is really good, great work!
115HauntedMiseryThis touched me my friend is a satanic and it hurts me so much. This is really good, great work!