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1CaliforniaGurl
Ooh! Haha! That chapter kinda made me feel like a freak! I'm in 7th grade, I'm 12, and I'm 5"7. I'm not even the tallest! Hehe! So anyway, great story! Can't wait to read the rest!
1CaliforniaGurlOoh! Haha! That chapter kinda made me feel like a freak! I'm in 7th grade, I'm 12, and I'm 5"7. I'm not even the tallest! Hehe! So anyway, great story! Can't wait to read the rest!
12/28/2011 c1 CaliforniaGurl
Ooh! Haha! That chapter kinda made me feel like a freak! I'm in 7th grade, I'm 12, and I'm 5"7. I'm not even the tallest! Hehe! So anyway, great story! Can't wait to read the rest!
Ooh! Haha! That chapter kinda made me feel like a freak! I'm in 7th grade, I'm 12, and I'm 5"7. I'm not even the tallest! Hehe! So anyway, great story! Can't wait to read the rest!
4/2/2008 c20 princessitaNATALIEinLUV51565
OMG! I LOVE IT!
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT!
YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER!
PLEASE CONTINUE!
I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
-NATALIE
OMG! I LOVE IT!
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT!
YOU ARE AN AWSOME WRITER!
PLEASE CONTINUE!
I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
-NATALIE
6/27/2007 c2 cheggs
you have SO MANY UNNECESSAEY COMMAS! maybe you should have someone edit this.
you have SO MANY UNNECESSAEY COMMAS! maybe you should have someone edit this.
11/2/2006 c19 Morgan
Update soon. u story would make an awsome book!
Update soon. u story would make an awsome book!
10/1/2006 c19 17Lady of romance world88
Poor Natalie. Is she going kill herself? Its not good to waste of life that ahead of her. God...what will Michael going to do? God...will Trevor find her and tell her dont do it. Anyway hurry update soon
17Lady of romance world88Poor Natalie. Is she going kill herself? Its not good to waste of life that ahead of her. God...what will Michael going to do? God...will Trevor find her and tell her dont do it. Anyway hurry update soon
9/23/2006 c19 Holly Young
yaay! you're updating again!i totally love the whole, depressive turn that the story's taken. you MUST update soon!
yaay! you're updating again!i totally love the whole, depressive turn that the story's taken. you MUST update soon!
5/27/2006 c18 Lady of romance world88
Hey! Wow! Why does Trevor wants to call Natalie for? Is something wrong? He is the one who rape her and kill her own parents. Oh dear. Poor Natalie. Hurry update soon.
Hey! Wow! Why does Trevor wants to call Natalie for? Is something wrong? He is the one who rape her and kill her own parents. Oh dear. Poor Natalie. Hurry update soon.
5/26/2006 c18 michael
hey wheres me in all of this huh?
hey wheres me in all of this huh?
5/26/2006 c18 Morgan
i hope morgan and natalie become friends again! lol
i hope morgan and natalie become friends again! lol
5/25/2006 c2 Morwennia
This is actually excellent. It's believable, and interesting. You convey emotions beautifully.
This is actually excellent. It's believable, and interesting. You convey emotions beautifully.