for And the Dreams, They Fade10/9/2006 c1 
41sarah1491
It's great. I love the emotion and feeling portrayed. It is such a nice song. I can totally imagine someone singing it softly. :) Nice use of vocabulary. Amazing. I can't write songs at all, so I find this great. :)
- Sarah
41sarah1491It's great. I love the emotion and feeling portrayed. It is such a nice song. I can totally imagine someone singing it softly. :) Nice use of vocabulary. Amazing. I can't write songs at all, so I find this great. :)
- Sarah
12/2/2005 c1 10WestviewFoxx
I love this! Especially the chorus. It's very...very...curses! Why are there never enough words in this language! Grr! I guess I will have to settle with 'awesome'. Pure and simple. Keep doin' what you do.~Hugglz&Pokez~
10WestviewFoxxI love this! Especially the chorus. It's very...very...curses! Why are there never enough words in this language! Grr! I guess I will have to settle with 'awesome'. Pure and simple. Keep doin' what you do.~Hugglz&Pokez~
11/5/2005 c1 25techielovn
I really like this piece. It has some subtle rhyming, which I like, it doesn't sound forced at all. I like the imagery you use. I also like the word "ominous". This is a great word, more people should use it.
25techielovnI really like this piece. It has some subtle rhyming, which I like, it doesn't sound forced at all. I like the imagery you use. I also like the word "ominous". This is a great word, more people should use it.
10/24/2005 c1 3Glassed Rose
That was amazing! Very very very good! -claps- I really liked the chorus. This is going onto my favorites! nice work! ^^ I hope to hear this on the radio some day.
3Glassed RoseThat was amazing! Very very very good! -claps- I really liked the chorus. This is going onto my favorites! nice work! ^^ I hope to hear this on the radio some day.
10/18/2005 c1 133Dying Rose
Wow, this is really good. A phenominal, touching piece. The style and wording are awesome. Great job!
133Dying RoseWow, this is really good. A phenominal, touching piece. The style and wording are awesome. Great job!
10/15/2005 c1 5Caillean Amory
This is fantastic...I really don't know what else to say about it other than that...Great...I love it.
5Caillean AmoryThis is fantastic...I really don't know what else to say about it other than that...Great...I love it.
10/12/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, pretty~~ dreams always provoke such interesting poetry~ good job
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorowow, pretty~~ dreams always provoke such interesting poetry~ good job
keep writing!
10/9/2005 c1 60Lovejoy
Beautiful work! Thoroughly enjoyed! You have a good way with words that really doesn't match your author title... why are you called Bobbers?
60LovejoyBeautiful work! Thoroughly enjoyed! You have a good way with words that really doesn't match your author title... why are you called Bobbers?
10/8/2005 c1 gold against the soul
I like your style. You write honestly and with real insight and passion. I'd love to hear this as a song because it already has a musical, lyrical quality.
- GATS
I like your style. You write honestly and with real insight and passion. I'd love to hear this as a song because it already has a musical, lyrical quality.
- GATS
10/5/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
O. Pretty song! Pretty song!
Wow. What great lyrics.
"Obscure in the ominous clouds of reality"
LOVE!
8Unknown UnnamedO. Pretty song! Pretty song!
Wow. What great lyrics.
"Obscure in the ominous clouds of reality"
LOVE!
9/30/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
beautiful. sorry if i sound so half-hearted, but... things are going on in my family. read my new poem, "Tap on the Shoulder" to find out. i'll go now. job well done.
just,~shadow
92Fate Defiedbeautiful. sorry if i sound so half-hearted, but... things are going on in my family. read my new poem, "Tap on the Shoulder" to find out. i'll go now. job well done.
just,~shadow