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10/6/2005 c1 24starbyrd
wow, powerful ending! i am so excited to read more of your work. you are talented and thank you for sharing your gifts because you are in inspiration. (and thank you for your constructive criticism on my own pieces...you were right on!)
10/2/2005 c1 237classic violet
Beautiful. Amazing. This is an amazing peice of poetry.
10/2/2005 c1 63lackluster
wow, brilliant ending. it just makes you stop. rare, very rare.

ps: happy (late) birthday.:) i was away. sososorry.
9/30/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, i can't seem to imagine the colour golden red O_o must be, unique... well, that part really stood out to me^^ the ending line, was, whew... mixed emotions~ good work!

keep writing!
9/30/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Love is the word preached, but love is the word most often breached. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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